Supporting fiction writers doing the hard work of revising unputdownable novels. The novel editing process is the creative crucible where you discover the story you truly want to tell—and it can present some of the most challenging moments on your writing journey. Developmental editor and book coach Alice Sudlow will be your companion through the mess and magic of revision. You’ll get inspired by interviews with authors, editors, and coaches sharing their revision processes; gain practical t ...
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Think You Need a Line Editor? Try This First
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27:44Do you need to hire a line editor? Or should you line edit your manuscript yourself? After all, you want to write an excellent novel. You know that great writing takes shape in revision, and you don’t want to skimp on any layers of editing. Nor do you want to overestimate your writing skills and leave your book littered with clunky sentences that a…
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How Surrealist Pantser A.S. King Revises Award-Winning Novels
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1:29:34“Revising is about making sure that you're saying what you want to say in the way you want to say it. . . . To me, revision is the sport. It's the impact. It's the reason we're writers.” Have you ever read a book and thought, Holy cow, this is amazing. How did this author DO this? Or, maybe you’ve read a book and thought, Wow, I wish I could write …
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The Editor Life: 5 Days Behind the Scenes with Alice
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46:54Ever wondered what an editor actually does all day? What it looks like to spend all day supporting writers in their stories? Or what your editor’s doing in all that time when they’re not sharing their feedback with you? If those questions pique your curiosity, you’re in luck. I’m pulling back the curtain to share a week in my life as a developmenta…
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How to Use Revision Tools Like the Story Authority You Already Are with Brannan Sirratt
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57:36When to use frameworks to solve your story problems—and when to trust yourself and lean on your own story authority. You’ve heard of Save the Cat! Story Grid. Blueprint for a Book. These are all frameworks designed to help you edit a novel. If you don’t know these names, I bet you know others—Hero’s Journey, Freytag’s Pyramid, 7 Point Story Structu…
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Ask This Question When You’re Overwhelmed by Your Story
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22:49Escape analysis paralysis with one powerful question. It’s deceptively simple—and yet it unlocks everything. If you’re like most of the writers I work with, you’re pretty savvy about story structure. You know your Story Grid, your Save the Cat!, your Hero’s Journey. You’ve probably analyzed your story six ways to Sunday, and you’ve got the spreadsh…
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How Multiple Layers of Editing Combine to Perfect Your Story (with Cathryn deVries and Kim Kessler)
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1:32:05The best novels combine rock-solid story structure with scenes that are unputdownable on every page. Here’s how one writer and two editors polished a story at every level. If you want to move your reader in every moment, keep them hooked on every page, you need to refine your scenes until each one is unputdownable. And that refinement? It’s SUCH a …
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What Is a Manuscript Evaluation? (And Do You Need One?)
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32:34It’s the most common developmental editing service you’ll see. Know what to look for and when (or if) you need one. If you google “developmental editor” and start looking through editors’ websites, you’ll see a common service appear again and again: A manuscript evaluation. (Or assessment, or diagnostic, or critique. A rose by any other name, etc.)…
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Scene Workshop: Hook Your Readers in Chapter One with Cathryn deVries
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1:38:37You get one shot to grab their attention. Don’t waste it with characters staring off into space. You've put all this work into uncovering your character's internal arc. You know them SO WELL. When you step into a scene, you're giving your absolute all to uncovering the deep meaning and purpose behind it, the profound arc of character transformation…
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The Unskippable Process to Create Unputdownable Books
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25:57It’s unpopular, but essential if you’re aiming to craft your best work. Picture this: one year from now, you’re holding your book in your hands. You see the gorgeous cover art, feel the slight resistance when you open the cover for the first time, run your hands over the soft, smooth paper, flip the pages and smell that delicious new book smell. Do…
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How to Edit Your Novel When Disaster Strikes
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17:28Your book is important. But sometimes, worthy interruptions will delay it for a while. For the last few months, this podcast feed has been quiet. It went dark with no notice in mid-June. I didn’t mean to disappear on you. In fact, I didn’t plan to pause the podcast at all. But a family emergency struck, and all my best-laid plans for summer 2024 ch…
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How Taylor Jenkins Reid Crafts an Exceptional Opening Scene
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30:24Your reader experiences your story one scene at a time. Make every scene un-put-down-able. Great stories are made of great scenes. Sure, your novel has a clever plot with twists and turns from the first page to the last. But the way your readers will experience that plot is . . . . . . one scene at a time. Which means if you want your readers to fa…
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2 “Showing” and "Telling" Ways to Convey Time Passing in Your Novel
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16:34Show and tell your readers why time matters to your characters. Time matters. When you look up and it’s dark outside, time matters to you. When your characters look around and summer is turning into fall, time matters to them. When your readers are reading a novel and they can’t figure out how time is passing? Well, time matters to them, too—mostly…
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3 “Telling” Ways to Convey Time Passing in Your Novel
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27:30Don’t lose your readers. Just tell them what time it is. The passage of time seems intuitive. It just happens, right? (Like, whether you want it to or not. Time and tide wait for no man, etc.) Here’s the thing, though. If you don’t tell your readers that time is passing in your novel . . . . . . they won’t know. It seems wild, I know. It feels like…
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Why You Must Show Time Passing in Your Novel
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16:04This is often overlooked, but it’s essential for great stories. How do you make time pass? Well, when you’re living your regular life in the real world, you don’t have to do anything. Time is constantly passing, no matter what you do. And when a timer goes off, or you look outside and see the sun’s gone down, or you feel your stomach growl with hun…
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When Should You Practice, and When Should You Publish?
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18:28Write your best stories—and know when to let go and publish them. In order to write great books, you first have to learn how to write great books. But when it comes to writing, there’s always something more to learn. So how do you know when to practice your writing skills—and more importantly, when to publish the stories you’re creating? That’s wha…
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You Can't Skip Learning How to Write a Novel. Here's Why
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20:51Before you can master writing great stories, you have to learn to craft great stories. When I was fifteen, I got my learner’s permit and began learning how to drive a car. This made me very unhappy. See, I wanted to know how to drive a car. I didn’t want to learn to drive a car. Knowing how to drive a car was fun, freeing, and exciting. Learning to…
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4 Tips for Your First Time Working With an Editor
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20:05Because working with an editor should be delightful, not scary. Let's be honest. When you start working with an editor for the first time, it can feel a little scary. You’re sharing your manuscript, the project you’ve worked so hard on, with a stranger on the internet. You’re inviting another person into a process that up until now has been entirel…
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4 Tips to Find the Right Editor for Your Novel
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12:34What you need to know BEFORE you start working with an editor—and how to tell if they’re the right fit for your novel. Working with a developmental editor can be the most rewarding part of your editing process. But if you’ve never worked with an editor before, it can also be . . . intimidating. Confusing. Scary. After all, you’ve got to hand your m…
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Why Writers Resist Measuring Their Craft (And Why You Shouldn’t)
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23:57What we get wrong about creativity—and the truth that will make your writing and editing so much more effective. Do you know how great stories work? Scratch that. Let’s start with an easier question. Do you know how your stories work? Not all writers do. Even published authors often struggle to articulate how they created the books their readers lo…
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The Pros and Cons of Group Coaching for Writers
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21:26Why group coaching might be the perfect way to get feedback on your writing. When I was first getting started, I pictured editing like this: A writer writes a manuscript and sends it to their editor. The editor writes feedback and sends it back. The writer takes that feedback and uses it to edit their manuscript. That’s the classic form of editing.…
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5 Steps to Edit the Second Draft of a Novel
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20:15The simple editing process to turn your messy first draft into a second draft you love. “I’ve written first drafts before, but I’ve never edited a second draft. How do you actually do it?” A writer asked me this a few days ago. And they’re not alone—it’s a question I hear a lot. How do you actually edit a novel? Is there a process? A system? A stra…
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Why a Page One Rewrite Is Actually Worth Celebrating
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17:07It sounds scary, but it’s actually MAJOR editing progress. What if the best way to make progress on your novel . . . . . . is to go back to the beginning? Sometimes, the most effective editing strategy is a page one rewrite. Yes, that means exactly what it sounds like. You open a blank document and begin writing an entirely fresh manuscript. It mig…
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What It REALLY Means to Make Progress Editing Your Novel
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18:21Editing progress doesn’t always look like you’d expect. Here’s how to recognize it. If your editing is going great, you’ll enjoy this episode. Honestly, though, if editing feels like the worst thing in the world right now, you’ll love this episode even more. Here’s what’s in store: How do you know whether you’re really making progress editing your …
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The Most Joyful Editing Feedback I Ever Give
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10:43Here’s what happens when you absolutely NAIL IT in your story. Sometimes, you just nail it. The ideas click. The words flow. The revision works. Those days are my favorite days to give my clients feedback. When the pieces finally fall into place and the story is transformed for the better. On those days, I get to share my most joyful editing feedba…
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The Top 5 Lessons From Year 1 of Building My Editing Business
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22:04Your editing process has more in common with building a business than you might think. Editing a novel and building a business . . . well, they’re actually not all that different. That’s something I’ve been thinking about all year. As I’ve coached writers through the editing process, I’ve been struck again and again by how similar novel editing and…
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The Top 5 Editing Tips From Your Next Draft in 2023
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22:58The year’s most popular editing tip, plus four more strategies I don’t want you to miss. What’s the best editing tip you’ve learned this year? If you’ve been listening to Your Next Draft all year, there are quite a few to pick from—fifty, in fact. So in this episode, I’m taking a look back at this year on Your Next Draft. I’ve selected the top five…
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My Biggest Takeaway From Coaching Writers in 2023
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12:52What dozens of manuscripts and dozens of writers all have in common. This weekend, I celebrated the one year anniversary of launching my editing business. And since the one year mark is a pretty major milestone, and we’re nearing the end of 2023, I’ve been looking back. I’ve edited dozens of novels and coached dozens of writers this year. And while…
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How to Make Sure Even Your "Slow" Scenes Keep Your Readers Hooked
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19:02Four questions to make every scene of your novel un-put-down-able. Some of your scenes are really exciting. They’re the big ones, the reasons why your readers picked up your book: the first kiss, the epic battle, the discovery of the body. And some of your scenes . . . well, they’re the stuff that happens in between the exciting scenes. In those sc…
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How to Figure Out What Your Character REALLY Wants
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22:11Make your readers care about your story by getting specific about what your protagonist wants—and why. What does your protagonist want? I bet you have an answer for that question. I also bet that your answer is a little . . . generic. See, the thing your protagonist wants is good. They might want to save a victim from a villain, or fall in love, or…
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Behind the Scenes of a Deep Dive Manuscript Evaluation
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28:49The 7 layers of analysis I use to edit a fourth draft of a novel. I don’t know about you, but right now, my schedule is full. My days are packed with editing. I have several manuscripts I’m absolutely loving on my desk right now, so many pages to read, and so many notes to share with writers. With all this editing, I didn’t have time to put togethe…
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How to Flesh Out Flat Characters With Just 4 Questions
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19:38The minimum viable character questionnaire to develop all your side characters. How do you flesh out a flat character? Create a cast your readers will fall in love with? Make each character realistic, well-developed, and believable? There are tons of character development questionnaires and personality tests and character sketch templates out there…
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The Most Important Principle When Choosing Your Point of View
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13:50Use the limitations of your POV to enhance your story. Your story’s point of view impacts everything. It shapes how your readers get access to information about your story. And it shapes what information they have access to. And since at its core, storytelling is just telling your reader information about a story, this is huge. In this episode, I’m…
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What NOT to Say to Your Developmental Editor
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17:45How to make the most of your editor’s feedback—even if you disagree with it. If you want to make the most of your editor’s feedback, there’s one phrase not to say. It’s natural. It’s normal. It’s something I’ve definitely said in other areas of my life. But when you’re collaborating with an editor to make your novel the best it can be, this phrase …
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Use This One Editing Tip for Everything You Write
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26:26How to developmentally edit absolutely ANY piece of writing. There’s an editing tip that applies to literally every kind of writing. Bold statement, I know. But I stand by it. Actually, “tip” is understating the matter. This “tip” is actually a mission-critical principle. It’s essential to every writing project. Also, it’s my current favorite writi…
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[BONUS EP] How to Choose the Right Writing Resources for YOU Right Now, Part 2
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22:28A simple decision-making framework to help you find YOUR best writing path. Yesterday, I shared a framework to help you make any decision about your writing career. Well—yesterday, I shared part one of that framework. And today, I’m back on the podcast with part two! In yesterday’s episode, I coached you through how to identify your values in your …
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How to Choose the Right Writing Resources for YOU Right Now, Part 1
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25:39How to answer the question, “When should I work with an editor?” Hire an editor. Join a writing course. Work with a book coach. Gather beta readers. Join a writing group. There are so many resources to help you write and edit an amazing novel. This is great news when you know exactly what resource you need. If you need a very specific type of suppo…
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Scene Structure: How the 6 Elements of Story Work in the First Scene of How to Train Your Dragon
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23:44See the masterful story structure that undergirds the opening scene of How to Train Your Dragon. Great stories are built on great story structure. And my favorite story structure framework is one that you can apply on every level of story. It’s called the six elements of story, and it’s an editing tool you can use on every layer of your story. To p…
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Act Structure: How the 6 Elements of Story Work in Act 1 of How to Train Your Dragon
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22:27The story structure that makes the first act of How to Train Your Dragon work. One of my favorite things about the six elements of story structure is the fact that they work everywhere. You can use them to structure your entire novel. You can use them to structure each act. And you can use them to structure each scene. And to prove it, I’m breaking…
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Story Structure: How the 6 Elements of Story Work in How to Train Your Dragon
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24:58See the story structure that makes this brilliant movie work. The six elements of story are the essentials of great story structure. And in the last few episodes of Your Next Draft, I’ve shared a lot of theory about them: what they are, how they work, and where to use them. But theory only gets you so far. Story structure makes a lot more sense whe…
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3 Ways to Apply the 6 Elements of Story Structure to Your Novel
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15:03How to use one story structure tool to edit every part of your story. The best story structure is the one you can apply to your story. For the last couple of weeks, I’ve been discussing a lot of story theory on the podcast. Today, I’m getting back to application. In this episode, I’ll show you three ways to apply the six elements of story to your n…
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Why the 6 Elements of Story Are the Key to All Great Stories
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14:35The story structure framework I use in every story I edit. What do fractals and nesting dolls have to do with story structure? More than you might think. Last week on the podcast, I shared my favorite story structure framework. It’s the same structure I use with all my one-on-one clients and in every novel I edit. But I didn’t tell you why. Why is …
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The 6 Essential Elements of Every Novel, Act, and Scene
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18:56A simple, flexible story structure framework that works for every kind of story. Great stories are built on great story structure. And while there are a lot of story structure systems out there . . . . . . I do have a favorite. It’s one that I use every single day in my editing. I apply it to every story I edit. And it works every time. In this epi…
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Where Does Story Theory Come From, Anyway?
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16:43Story theory doesn’t sap creativity—it helps us reflect truths about the human experience in our art. When you edit a novel, much of your job is to use story theory to evaluate what’s working and what’s not. But often, I find that this makes writers uncomfortable. They’re afraid that applying story theory will suck the life, creativity, and origina…
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How to Read Like an Editor: 5 Tips to Make the Most of Every Book You Read
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20:41Build a reading habit that helps you edit amazing novels. “If you don’t have time to read, you don’t have the time (or the tools) to write. Simple as that.” This quote from Stephen King gets shared a lot in writer circles. But I have a confession: when I became an editor, I fell into a reading slump. Worse, I stayed in the slump for several years. …
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One Insidious Cause of Disappointing Endings (and How to Fix It)
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17:15Does your story’s climax solve a problem that’s different from the one you have? The last thing you want is for the ending of your novel to disappoint your readers. Yet as an editor, I’ve seen my fair share of disappointing endings. And in this episode, I’m sharing one of the most common problems I see with endings that just don’t work. You’ll lear…
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One Critical Problem You’ll Find in Boring Scenes (And How to Fix It)
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16:54Your characters MUST take action in every scene. Look out for scenes where they don’t. I’ve edited hundreds of scenes. (In fact, editing scenes is one of my favorite things to do!) In all that editing, I’ve picked up on some patterns. Things that work really well in scene after scene—and common pitfalls that many scenes fall into. And in this episo…
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What to Do When You Get Feedback From an Editor
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23:36Gotten feedback from an editor? Use this process to turn developmental feedback into actionable edits. One of the most exciting moments in your book writing journey is the day that you get feedback from an editor. But just getting feedback isn’t enough. Once you get it, you have to apply it. And the challenge of applying your editor’s feedback can …
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Your Story Has Deep Meaning. Do You Know What It Is?
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12:32Your story has the power to shape the way your readers think. So what is it communicating? That’s the topic of this episode. In it, I’m sharing why storytelling is absolutely essential for humanity, plus the responsibility—and honor—that gives you as an author. You’ll learn: Why your writing is a gift to the world 6 stories I love and how they’ve s…
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How to Create an Editing Process That Works for You With Author JD Edwin
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1:10:08A prolific author shares her editing process and strategies for designing the process that works for you. There are as many ways to edit novels as there are writers. Which editing process is best? The one that works for you. The process you customize, refine, and repeat, novel after novel after novel. And in this episode, we’re talking about how to…
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Extended Edition: How Spider-Man’s Leap of Faith Makes Us Feel Triumphant
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1:41:37Two editors break down how Spider-Man creates a transcendent moment of triumph that feels like story magic. Last month, I asked a big question: How do you make your readers feel? See, the writers I work with are telling fantastic stories. But often, those stories are missing some essential piece, some spark of magic that captures my emotions and ma…
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