赵强 points out issues in the Chinese email David wrote and provides concrete suggestions and writing templates to help him improve his Chinese writing skills.

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《English Translation》

赵强: David, your email doesn’t look very professional and needs to be revised.
大卫: Okay, Manager Zhao. How should I revise it?
赵强: First, the greeting should be formal. For example, use 'Dear Mr. Zhang' instead of just 'Hello.'
大卫: Understood. What else should I pay attention to?
赵强: The email content should be concise—state the issue, make suggestions, and end with a polite thank you.
大卫: Could you give me a template to look at?
赵强: Sure, for example: 'Dear Mr. Zhang, regarding your question, we suggest... Thank you for your understanding and support.'
大卫: Thank you, Manager Zhao. I’ll try revising it.